HI JIM!!! Saw this on my reader and think it's looking friggin great and I'm it's really inspiring to see you cranking this shit out. Love itA few things i noticed - When he looks sneakily to screen left, it looks like he's looking at his hand instead of off to the leftThe jump at the start could be way snappier or have the timing checked out againHis tail could stand a lot of loveI know it's only second pass, but just wanted to throw those things out there.Loveu and hope all is glorious in MadisonX O X O X O
Holy crap it's Rob! Hey man, thanks for the crit! I will surely address these comments as they're all good points. I've been looking at this one for a while with no feedback so it's good to hear some!Everything's going great in Madison. I hope everything is going well over in Baltimore. Say hi to Kevin and Evan for me.
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